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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
I love how you did the shading ^^
The lineart is ok, but i'm not saying that it's bad. I suggest that you should be more careful when drawing your lines so they'll be more smooth. If you use gimp like I do, there's an option called "smooth stroke" and then you can make your lineart less shaky, though i'm not saying that i'm any better then you are at linearts.
I also think that the background could use a bit of work, it's quite simple. I also think you should focus more on the shades and the light.
Now, overall, in my opinion this is a really nice drawing but has a few small mistakes.
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